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angel6917
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0 posted 05-15-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for angel6917   Email angel6917   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel6917

I miss having you near,
having someone to talk to,
a shoulder to cry on,
having a best friend to turn to.

I know you're happy where you are,
I'm glad you're home where you belong,
But you're my best friend,
and I hate having you gone.

I'm anxiously awaiting for
the day you come back to see me.
I'm missing you so much,
and I know you're missing me.

~Kristi Lynn
(Written for my best friend, Marina, who lives in Brazil.  I miss her so much!)
© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-15-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for DragonFang   Email DragonFang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DragonFang's Home Page   View IP for DragonFang

ohhh, very very nice poem there Kristi, I'm glad that I wrested the computer away from my netahalic sister. Anyway, I've got a few poems I'll be posting when I get a chance, but creating you own web based game (even just doing the resource gathering) eats up time =) well, that's all.
Love ya,
SAmson C.
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2 posted 05-15-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

It's always hard when a friend goes so far away, but when friendship is strong enough, it can cross any barrier. Good poem.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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3 posted 05-16-2000 04:56 AM       View Profile for 4eva_at_heart   Email 4eva_at_heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 4eva_at_heart

hey kristi this exact same thing happened to me....my bestfriend moved away when i was younger and i cried for days and days afterwards...she rang up one night and just told me that her parents had decided to move to anothee state...and that she was leaving the next morning on a train. i didn't even get to say goodbye....that happened almost 4 years ago....i haven't spoken to her in about a year or a little less....i think i may ring her but if you two have a strong friendship it can last over the distance

best wishes

Bec       

 i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone

'Adam's Song'
Blink 182
angel6917
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4 posted 05-17-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for angel6917   Email angel6917   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel6917

Thanx all for your replies!  It's really hard for me, having my best friend be gone.  She lives in Brazil, and I cry about misisng her a lot.  Thank you all for your support.
Lots of Love,
Kristi Lynn
           
ESP
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5 posted 05-18-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Dear Kristi,

I am sorry about your friend moving to Brazil, that has to be so hard on both of you. Hey, I'll email really soon....sorry for taking so long! Your friendship will survive, believe in it.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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6 posted 05-31-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for angel6917   Email angel6917   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel6917

ESP~
Thank you much chica!!  She's coming to visit me soon, and I can't wait!!  I haven't seen her in 2 years...    Talk to ya later.
Love,
Kristi Lynn
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7 posted 06-10-2000 03:27 AM       View Profile for angel6917   Email angel6917   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel6917

*BIG BUMP!!*
      
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8 posted 11-15-2007 07:22 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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