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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
will you expire ..... with the deepest desire and forget...was never what was meant.. what can i begin to say...never believed in anything.. anyway create a little abstraction..to break the monotony of those unfortunate..to be left.. with the burden known as me "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very well-written. It made me think. I like this. It's sort of dark, and sad at the same time  Keep it up(:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"with the burden known as me"???? Jackal!! Geez, man.. u r not a burden on anyone.. let me tell u.. this is kinda a depressed, self pitying poem, huh? ^_^ brighten up.. it ain't all bad.. yeah.. certainly made me think too.. *_^ right, I'm off ta study, just popped in ta say hi to a few of the poems here.. hehe Lynne |
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