carry me to safety (acrostic)

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carry me to safety (acrostic)

tawny
Junior Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 14

0 posted 2000-05-11 06:02 PM

Carry me into knowledge
About how I should
React to your unfeeling tears.
Release me or
You will erase me.

Make me realize your deception.
Erase me.

Trust me with truth.
Open an unseen trap.

Sanctuary disappears at your
Arrival in my world. I have
Forgotten how to feel.
Entice me with pretty memories,
Trade painful remembrances:
You've erased me.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-05-11 07:08 PM

Tawny, great job with this Acrostic. I like to write them as well. They're a little more challenging.
~~very nice writing~~

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-05-12 09:43 AM

Great piece of poetry here.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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