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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
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0 posted 2000-05-11 03:13 PM



Ah, the days, when I'm on my skateboard
I feel like flying, or just sitting around
When I'm on my board, the world is my playground

I dont view structures like your normal man
I see stairs and rails, as spots where I can
skate to my hearts content
and content it will be, everytime
I step on my board

Its a new type of sport
no teams, or competing
just me and my board
a most challenging feeling

No one cares whos the best
We just go for the leisure

A family of skaters
We are in it together...

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

© Copyright 2000 Lucius Cade - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-05-11 03:54 PM


This is a good poem (I love skateboarding), but you have broken a forum rule. I have e-mailed you, to explain this in more detail.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

brendon2k
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since 2000-05-11
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2 posted 2000-05-11 05:46 PM


I really like this poem. It shows the thougthts of all skateboarders in my opinion, very well done.
tawny
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since 2000-05-10
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3 posted 2000-05-11 05:59 PM


i like this.  i have a friend who feels the same way, and it is interesting to see this unusual type of joy in words.

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