Teen Poetry #2 |
The way of the skateboard |
Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Ah, the days, when I'm on my skateboard I feel like flying, or just sitting around When I'm on my board, the world is my playground I dont view structures like your normal man I see stairs and rails, as spots where I can skate to my hearts content and content it will be, everytime I step on my board Its a new type of sport no teams, or competing just me and my board a most challenging feeling No one cares whos the best We just go for the leisure A family of skaters We are in it together... Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem (I love skateboarding), but you have broken a forum rule. I have e-mailed you, to explain this in more detail. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
I really like this poem. It shows the thougthts of all skateboarders in my opinion, very well done. |
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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
i like this. i have a friend who feels the same way, and it is interesting to see this unusual type of joy in words. |
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