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We cant go back anymore
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We cant go back anymore |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Today a girl comes forth From thin air, blown into my life She taunts and teases, as to say She is in need of a man like I All this right out of the blue She praises my every move, Takes intrest in all the same as I Always talking sweet to me As if to say, I want you All this right out of the blue Now a question I must ponder Is that of love or friendship We have past the point of no return Its all or none, my heart informs All this right out of the blue Her gaze meets mine, we dont avert Our eyes stay locked, as if in parley Over our problem, of love or ...... It dawns on us... There is no or, we cant go back anymore Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem. True, after you cross a point, you can never go back. That's true in all things. Good work. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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