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In truth and honor
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In truth and honor |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Enitce me oh lord, For this world is a crule one, Murderous sabotiors I find staring at me wondering what I have up my sleve, Well here I am you scum in truth and honor I hide nothing, But I am just here to speard some news I have heard in which will surprise you, now get ready my friends for the time has come to unlock the mystery around me if you want to know bout me look to the father above to see the half beast I am, Yes I am a half beast half man and half angel id who I am one more secret before I go this is I good one in which all should know ready God loves all of us and he is watching For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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Frosty Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 17 |
Wow, this is a tough one, it's really good, I can tell you have a strong faith, and sometimes it is like that, a search, a quest.I must admit though, that last line is kinda creepy, you have to admit. Have a great day ~Kathleen~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really good strong poem and you can definatly tell that you have a strong faith in your religion. Nice work. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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