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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-05-08 01:35 AM


I take a deep breath
and feel the cool air in my lungs
I feel the warm breeze on my face
the sun just heading over the horizon
it feels good to be alive
life is so good now
living out every day to the fullest
enjoying every day
looking forward to feeling the sun against my face
the mountains in the distance
brings a feeling of peace
the moon is in sight now
it's light shimmers across the still lake
the sounds of the loons
the chirping of the crickets
the smell of the cool air
the sounds of the trees swaying
I take a deep breath
and feel a sense of relaxation all throughout me
life is so good out here
I feel like I've found myself
this is who I really am
and this is what I want for the rest of my life
I want my life to feel this good forever.

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
Carly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2000-05-08 09:37 AM



   I really liked this poem!! I can feel like I'm actually there.  Life is good indeed! Keep it up.

   ~Carly

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-08 08:31 PM


Thanks Carly, I'm glad you could find this place while you read it. I hope to hear from you again!!!!smiles poe
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