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Rachel8383
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-05-07 11:57 PM


my word choices my be a bit strange, but i didn't have a vast vocabulary to choose from, i just pulled up a chair, and i was missing my love so much, and i just felt like composing a peice to get all that emotion out that i couldn't shower on him.
they might sound a bit strange.  rachel

my one love

a universe of porcelain flowers

blowing through my heart

its no secret

he is an angel

a symphony

pink purple perfume

i see your smile

i fall down a vast hole

free

i think you

i tell you

it is no lie


the second one is short, just he amazes me

You & Joy
theres some magic to it

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Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-08 01:34 AM


Hey, what a great idea! ^_^ well, next time I'm bored I'll just get out the ol' letter magnets and write away, huh? ^_^ trouble is.. lol.. we don't have any room left on our fridge.. so many magnets and memos.. hehe
not bad.. not bad at all..

nice.. nah, the words don't sound funny at all...

Lynne

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