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if i would die
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Seysi New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 8kortrijk in belgium |
If I would die no one would care no one would cry they all would stare at my grave beneath there i am, under their feet no word would be spoken no muscle would move no heart would be broken no love would be proved they all would stare and just don't care |
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karmi New Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 6Lima, Ohio... usa |
i love it! but, is that truly how you feel? it brought tears to my eyes! it was very to the point. i can relate to that a lot... i went thru depression that year, and when i thought about suicide... that's how i felt. but, things'll get better! PEOPLE CARE!!  look up at the sun, i'm sure it's shining bright!-much love- ~karmi* (if you wanna see more poetry, go to: http://mypage.goplay.com/iseeyouinme/ ) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family....here at Passions you will find that we do care. Our hearts are big enough to love everyone...and we don't judge you...life is precious and so are you...please check your email for a special message.  |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
i have wondered this before, how many people would come to my funeral if i died, how many people would actually care. at least you can express yourself, putting it into words is a great way of therapy. keep it up. rachel |
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Seysi New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 8kortrijk in belgium |
thank you for all the good things you sweet people wrote about my poem and yes... i really feel that way sometimes Seysi |
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