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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-05-03 01:40 AM


This is my best poem...sorry it's so long, but it is ALL true about someone...

I think this might be Good bye, forever
Because my friendship won't matter whatsoever
I’m out of your heart, now out of your eyes
But to you it comes no surprise
You have proved to me you never cared
Since you were willing to be shared
You only ignored me and put me down
You made me look like such a clown
You used me for my looks and money
I was never really your little honey
I put so much time and effort into you
But you never appreciated what I would do
I am very sensitive and fragile
I needed your touch once in a while
I let you into my heart
Thinking we would never part
Only in return I found who you really were
And now all I want you to be is nothing, but a blur
I have so much love to give
And my whole life to live
I just I hope I will be able to find
Someone that won’t keep me in a bind
Someone who won’t lure me in
To another pathetic life full of sin
I was only looking to be loved
But instead I was just shoved
Pushed away with no explanation
So you could have a permanent vacation
Here you go being selfish again
Try to act your age, and stop being ten
Face the facts of life for once
Stop hiding behind the drug inside blunts
One of these days you will understand
When some girl won’t be willing to lend a helping hand
You don’t deserve anything good
Since I did all that I could
You only took me for granted
You never loved me, those words were just chanted
I said I’d always be here for you
But now I am not so sure I really want to
What will you give me in return?
Nothing that won’t leave me to burn
You couldn’t even tell me the truth
You have always lied through every single tooth
I don’t even think you would be a good friend
So whatever it is that we still have might just be coming to an end
How can I believe if you are ever being real?
Since you have never told me how you actually feel
You would have to start talking
Instead of running and walking
If you want to stay close
Give me some sort of dose
The old stuff you had inside of you
Those words that made me stick like glue
Deep within this shattered heart
I think I can pull out this painful dart
We just might be able to see
Us being friends like we always wanted it to be


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-03 08:33 AM


Wow!! What alot of emotion....it's like you are trying to decide whether it is worth giving that "someone" another chance or not. A decision that will need some careful consideration. Lovely poem btw. I really enjoyed it cos it flows like emotion flows.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Stephanya
Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
2 posted 2001-02-02 03:40 AM


***bump***
Wow, huh?! A year ago...? My life was awful...thank God for my 2nd love. He's a million times better.


(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or
relationship is about to end*
XOXOpsst...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:45 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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