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Ashiraladoni
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-05-02 10:33 PM


This is my Farewell to Love
The Love of my life, I must bid
farewell
The pain gets stronger but there's nothing
I can do, but just turn away from loving you

Those nights that I wish I was beside
you, with you body next to mine
those times when you held me tight
and said everything will be all right

But I have to say goodbye, farewell
cause my heart is torn in two
and if I don't get away from you
it'll never heal.

This is my farewell to Love
to the Love of my life
the one I cherish more than
anything in life

Please forgive me, I know I cannot change
who I am, but you must understand
that I must leave you, and never return.

This is my farewell to Love
to the Love of my Life.

© Copyright 2000 Heidi Wiitanen - All Rights Reserved
Karen
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 36
Utah
1 posted 2000-05-02 10:42 PM


This is so sad!  But what is even sadder is that there are so many people that can relate.  I hope you don't say goodbye to love period, for that is what brings us true happiness
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-05-10 11:17 AM


You will have many loves in your life and with each one, you will discover something new about yourself.  Maybe that's the best thing about love, it teaches us about ourselves.
~~nice writing~~

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