Teen Poetry #2 |
Together |
lost soul Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20 |
Want me, like I want you Hold me, like I always dreamed you would Kiss me, forever more Together we will be happy for all eternity. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wow. I can feel the love in this one...powerful emotion. Hey, can I suggest you don't post so many poems at once...cos you'd get more replies if you don't post so many at a time. Well, I guess I'll go look at some more poems now! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very nice (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
WOW!! that is good. I can relate to it so easly. Keep up the good work. <3, Hopeful |
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