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lost soul
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 20


0 posted 2000-05-02 09:20 PM


Want me, like I want you

Hold me, like I always dreamed you would

Kiss me, forever more

Together we will be
happy for all eternity.


 

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-03 04:31 PM


Wow. I can feel the love in this one...powerful emotion.
Hey, can I suggest you don't post so many poems at once...cos you'd get more replies if you don't post so many at a time.
Well, I guess I'll go look at some more poems now!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-03 11:09 PM


Very nice  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


hopeful
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27

3 posted 2000-05-04 08:12 PM


WOW!! that is good. I can relate to it so easly. Keep up the good work.

<3,
Hopeful

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