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lost soul
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 20


0 posted 2000-05-02 08:51 PM


Our love could not be
because of the difrences between you and me
you were sweet and I was sour
I was a weed and you were a flower
I was a hater and you were a lover
You gave me your heart
But I couldnt give you mine
For a monsters heaart is the size of a dime,so what would it matter
So here we are not together
And all I have to say is im sorry
Sorry for ruining your life with my ugliness
sorry for filling your mind with my depressing
life stories
Sorry for poisoning your heart with my killer lips
Im so sorry


 

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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-05-03 02:12 AM


very strong
i like this one alot
good work
keep it up
:

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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