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Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-05-02 02:28 PM

Let me be your protection
And be with you day and night
I won't let anyone hurt you
Or let you out my sight.

Let me be your guiding star
To stop you getting Lost
I'll do for you what ever it takes
No-matter what the cost.

Let me be your sunshine
That brightens up your day
I'll take you out where ever you want
For fun in anyway.

Let me be your soul
Thats with you forever and ever
At least this way you'll know
That we will be together.

Let me be forever and ever
At your side and never ever
Hurt you or call you, in anyway
It'll be like that, everyday
Cos' mine is a Love
Only for you
No-Body else
And that is true
If all you want
Is to be with me
Then all you do
Is Let Me Be.

Barelybreathing
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 46

1 posted 2000-05-02 04:40 PM

I wish someone would write something like this to me!! Sweet poem. Keep writing.

~sami~

'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-05-06 08:20 PM

Lovely poem! Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2000-05-06 08:57 PM

~Ben~

A great first post! A very well written piece, very creative and the flow was perfect. Welcome to passions!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

4 posted 2000-05-07 08:38 AM

Thanks everyone for yor support on this piece, I've nearly completed my next poem.

Rachel8383
Junior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 44

5 posted 2000-05-07 11:45 PM

i really have enjoyed this. though you say you have almost "completed" your other poems, mine take moments, its just when ever i have an overflow of emotion, they just pour out. keep it up, it was great! rachel

Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

6 posted 2000-05-08 01:29 PM

Your right it happens to me too.I allways write a poem when i get a rush of emotion, Thanks for reading this one. My next one is titled "I Love You Because"

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