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heaven_legih_angel
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since 2000-04-30
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0 posted 2000-05-01 04:17 PM


He Touched Me....

You know I love you
Yeah that's what he said.

He acted real smooth
Just to fet me in bed.

He touched my body
Like it'd been touched so many times before.

I thought I gave him everything
But still he wanted more.

He won't remember my name
It doesn't matter to him.

He'll score points with the guys
I'm just another lay.

He told me he loved me
What they'd all said.

I'll make you feel special
Come on let's go to bed.

I said I wanna go slow
He said baby come on, just let it flow.

I lay still
as he takes a little more control.

I just lay still
nothing left of my soul.

When we're all done
He rolls over to and sleeps.

I lay there and think
Why did I let him do this to me?

I have no answers and
Cry myself to sleep...



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Michelle
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since 2000-05-01
Posts 9

1 posted 2000-05-01 04:46 PM


This poem is so sad! Did it really happen? I am really sorry if it did!

Michelle
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since 2000-05-01
Posts 9

2 posted 2000-05-01 04:46 PM


This poem is so sad! Did it really happen? I am really sorry if it did!

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-05-01 05:14 PM


This poem was well-written.
**************************
Oh, you poor thing. Are you okay? IF YOU EVER NEED TO TALK FEEL FREE TO E-MAIL ME.

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
4 posted 2000-05-01 09:41 PM


thank you for posting that -- i am glad to know that other people out there have been through that -- if you ever need to talk i am always here (rezzie00@yahoo.com)  i know that it must have taken a lot of courage to share this poem with other people (or at least it would have for me)  without realizing it, you have given me a little bit of strength.  

p.s.  even if you haven't personally gone through what you wrote about, thank you anyway  

heaven_legih_angel
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 9

5 posted 2000-05-01 10:45 PM


Thank you everyone for such wonderful input. I am new to passions and I didn't think any of my work would get this much praise so soon.
son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

6 posted 2000-05-01 11:45 PM


a sad story, but a great job on the poem. dont let the dogs get to you, your so much more than just a lay, you are a person. believe that.

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MrHat
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 34
Gilroy, Ca
7 posted 2000-05-02 02:51 AM


This poem i liked. It had a very sad tune though. I hear all these things about guys that just wanna screw, without even caring. I have seen it happen to friends. IT SUX! Even though I happen to be a guy, I HATE GUYS! for doing this to girls/women. Its wrong. Guess I went off the subject a little. Anyways, great poem. Keep it up.

 "DO NO GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT"

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men and their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught the sun in flight,
And learn too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on that sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

-Dylan Thomas

huney_mel
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 52

8 posted 2000-05-02 06:02 AM


Thats such a good poem. Your very good. WELL DONE!
Love mel

Karen
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 36
Utah
9 posted 2000-05-02 10:15 PM


I am crying...
JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
10 posted 2000-05-03 01:00 AM


Don't worry hun! This sort of thing has happened to me before. You still have more power over him because he is a coward for using someone so intellegent for something that should be shared with TRUE love. He's a jerk. I know some girls do it too, but that is still wrong. Male or Female. You loved him and he played you like a fiddle! People can be so cruel, I know. I"m here for you tho, hun!
-JennyeMeshan  


 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


heatherbear
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48

11 posted 2000-05-05 08:56 PM


Your poem is great!!  i know its sad and things like that happen all the time.  All guys are dogs until they prove that they're not!!!  Hang in there   -heatherbear
snowgirl17
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20
Cloquet,Mn
12 posted 2000-05-05 10:40 PM


Wow! That is terrible...think about what you have learned...great poem...but a consevisal topic...great writing


 Lane C.

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