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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Just sitting here watching you play, seeing you smile, yet wondering if anything I do is really worth your while. You seem so sincere with every look and every touch, but after all that's happened, I wonder if anyone can really care so much. I wait for you to come here and hold me tight, just so I can see that this will work out, and I know it's all right... ~Kristi Lynn (I wrote this while I was with Grady.... I guess now I know the answers to this one...) |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
very sweet and to the point  Keep up the good work! (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Stephanie~ Thank you for your reply... Glad you liked it...  ~Kristi Lynn |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, I love your poem, and yeah, I know where you're coming from (to some extent). Stuff like this just sucks, there's no other way to describe it. (well okay, it hurts, it bites, it stings, it makes you feel like crap....) Anyways, you did a great job on your poem, and I know you'll find the person who will really be sincere when he says he loves you. Smile!!!  *~Meredith~* [This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Meredith~ Hey there! Thanks for your reply, of course. I know how much this stuff bites, but I'm hoping to find someone who loves me for me, and not for who they want me to be, what they're friends think, or some other things I won't mention here... Wish me luck! Love, Kristi Lynn |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
GOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD LLLLUUUCCCCKKKKKK KRISTI-POOH! Love, JennyeMeshan "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
When the time is right, you will find your prince....and you will live happily ever after. But I guess til then, the hang out spot is Heartbreak Hotel! Sorry Grady didn't work out.... Btw..This poem is lovely! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ahh, very nice poem Kristi. I really like it. I'm also really sorry about you and Grady, but I'm sure that something will work out for you eventualy. Heh, gawd, I'm lucky I saw this one, I've been really bussy lately, spring play for school, new admin post *sigh* all fun... but no time for my poetry. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I liked when you said "I want to find someone to like me for what not for what I can be or what I can do for them" that is my prayer avery single morring when I wake up For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanx, Jennye.... I need it. Lizzie~ Hearbreak Hotel has a few cute guys, so I might not do too bad.... J/K But, I'm sure it will. Thank you for your support.Sam~ No time? Uh, oh.... Keep in touch with me at least, okay? *Big Hugs* jytree~ That is my prayer as well. I hate that people like me for different reasons other than me being myself. I wish you all the luck in the world.... Love ya'll Lots Kristi Lynn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
*BUMPETY-BUMP* |
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