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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-05-01 12:45 PM



You spread your wings
and fly right by me
making no notion to my presence

You look upon what lies in front of you
a true friend
whos been there for you through everything

You use to be the angel
the angel who loved me more than anyone else
but you've left me in the dark once again

Why must my angel leave me
never talk to me
or even bother with me

I miss my angel so much
at times I cry for my angel
I miss her too much

No one has ever made me smile like she did
nothing could get me down when I was with her

Why must you leave me angel
fly back to me
make me smile again

Be the sister in my life
end all my pain
be my guardian angel again

I miss you angel
I love you angel
be my angel again.

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-05-01 12:57 PM


wow. i see you really miss your angel. such an inspiring emotion, don't you agree?
i hope your angel returns to you soon poe.
good job.

 

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-01 05:01 PM


This was a very nice poem. I can relate to how you are feeling. Keep up the good work  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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