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Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana

0 posted 2000-04-30 11:48 PM


Dear God
I don't know whether your testing me
On my Strength, Faith, or Sanity
Whichever it may be
I need help with all three

Things can't be explained
As to why your doing this to me
Other than it's your way

I just don't understand
Why your against me
And not for me

The Strength I once had
Is now fading
I don't feel I can hold up on my own

The Faith I had
Is now just as weak
I feel I have no faith in life

The Sanity I did have
It's quickly depleting
I feel I am no longer me

I just want to know
Why did you choose me?
Why test me all the time?

Please, all I ask is your help
I could use my Faith, Strength and Sanity again
Can't you tell I need your help

Dear God,
I don't know whether your testing me
On my Strength, Faith, or Sanity
Whichever it may be
I need help in all three



 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


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son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-05-01 12:38 PM


i know how you feel all too well.
the bible says though our tests be like fire those who hold til the end shall be saved.
to help build your faith, there is the spiritual journeys forum. there are really great folks there that have some inspiring poetry that i am sure will uplift you. just dont give up!
good job.

 

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-01 09:38 AM


Don't lose faith, it is always darkest before dawn.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
3 posted 2000-05-01 01:50 PM


never give up never surrender because God has something in store for you I know that sometimes we christians feel it is impossible to over come that montain in your life but just remember phillpians 4:13 I can do all things in Christ who strengthn me.

 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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