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Teen Poetry #2

Anger and Betrayal

nikki813
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 15
PA, USA

0 posted 2000-04-29 02:09 PM

Anger and Betrayal

I am mad,
I've got reason to be,
Someone I trusted,
chose to betray me.

I'm not sure why they did,
maybe to have some fun,
but now the betrayal,
can never be undone.

I'll never look them in the eye,
or laugh with them again,
I'll just keep the memories,
of where, why, and when.

The hurt was too much,
the stab wound too deep,
we never will be close again,
hurtful memories I'll keep.

I might forget the things we've done,
and all the fun we've had,
but I'll never forget what you've done to me,
because it hurts so bad.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-29 04:33 PM

Nikki, first of all: Welcome to Passions! I found this poem flowed very well. If you write from experience, I think that although you are hurting from being betrayed, you must try to forgive and move on. Don't forget the good times, surely they are more pleasant and memorable than the bad? If you don't forgive you can't heal. Forgive not only for the other person but for yourself too. Free your heart in that way. I am sorry you are hurting like this. If you want to talk, email me at
janetmp@global.bw
I am always willing to listen and try to help!
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 04-29-2000).]

son of man
Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 125

2 posted 2000-04-29 08:36 PM

ooh, that stings!
great job!
your poem was quite interesting, and yes, the flow was really smoothe.
do forgive, even if you can't forget.
betrayal, the worst pain of all. a wound to the heart.

son of man
Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 125

3 posted 2000-04-29 10:36 PM

ouch! he he. read it again!

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

4 posted 2000-05-01 12:53 PM

Wow what a good poem. I saddly can relate to all of the anger and feelings you descirbed in this poem. Good job.
Gina

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