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huney_mel
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since 2000-03-09
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0 posted 2000-04-28 07:59 AM


I cant begin to tell you,
How much i feel inside,
I cant begin to tell you,
These feelings that cant hide.
I cant begin to tell you,
That the spark i feel for you is real,
I cant begin to tell you,
Because my mouth is sealed.
I cant begin to tell you,
That i never want to part,
I cant begin to tell you,
What goes on in my heart.

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-04-29 03:36 PM


Hi huney_mel
Its good. Just feel it and get enraptured in love. You needn't say, just feel it and that does great wonders.
This struck me very hard.

Sincerely
A_L

huney_mel
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 52

2 posted 2000-05-01 06:49 PM


thanx, all you guys who reply to these poems, because then we get a good idea of what we are doing right and what we are doing worng. Thanx  
Love mel

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