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ABubblesB15 New Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 5Chico, CA, USA |
With You When I am with you, It is like nothing else. Nothing at all matters, Not the moon, stars, rain, or sun. Not the people around us or even the world. When I am with you, I feel complete, secure and loved. When I am with, I savor the time I am with you and make it last an eternity. When I am with you, You make me feel beautiful and loved. You make me feel no one is more important than I. When I am with you, Everything looks like it shines. The rocks, grass, and, sky above. I know I gleam with joy, I know I am the happiest girl in the world, And I know why. Because I am with you. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
*single tear* i know exactly how you feel  except what makes it harder is that i only get to see that special person every 10-12 weeks  such a sincere poem...very sweet...have you shown this special person your poem?? i am postively sure they would be flattered! Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
This is a very good poem. I like it a lot. You did a good job of expressing your emotions for a guy in your words. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more from you. Gina |
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