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Jimmy
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 2000-04-27 04:27 PM



When I see you i almost cry,
When you leave I feel I want to die.

Thinking of all that we had,
Through all the good and all the bad.

Now the times have changed,
Your heart and thoughts rearranged.

I am doin all that can be done,
But really life is what I am running from.

 "A Love Found Brings A Smile, But The Lost Lost Only Brings Pain"

© Copyright 2000 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
RachieChicken
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since 2000-04-27
Posts 5

1 posted 2000-04-28 12:59 PM


hey, that's a really interesting poem.  It can make a person think twice about why people act the way they do.
4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-04-28 07:22 AM


hey jimmy...is this connected to laci??
i have a friend who is experiencing the exact same thing as you...she has been apart with her ex boyfriend for about 3 months now...and she still loves him after all the cruel and emotional toying things he did to her. He made her into the person he wanted, then he broke her...and to this day i am still trying to pick up the pieces and reassemble her heart and self esteem  

things get better...and i know that the most common thing said is "give it time and the wound will heal" or "things get better eventually" but they are so true.
give a little time...but don't spend too much time looking back....memories are great, but tomorrow is what you make it...and i strongly suggest that you make it a happy one

best of luck and see you on the happy 'morrow

Bec

 i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone

'Adam's Song'
Blink 182

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
3 posted 2000-04-29 12:59 PM


Hey...don't worry..things get better.

Love Always,
Shell.

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