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Lasting a lifetime....
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
however brief the moment it can last a lifetime if you only let it shine in hope..i can dream and pretend everythings mine skip stones in the water forget who i am..and get lost in the tides of time.. with the silence of many their beacon..their burden leaving me to immerse myself in plenty..of pity |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
i can identify with the situation here, while wallowing in my own self-pity, i have accomplished very little, but have written some pretty cool poems!i like your poem. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is a great piece... i just hope you don't feel in which the poem conveys. i haven't read one of your pieces in a while...forgot how good they are  great posting once again looking forward to your next masterpiece Bec  i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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