Teen Poetry #2 |
The Love Me Sheet |
Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
This is dedicated to my former number one fan. You know who you are. --Ashira. This is your special "love me" sheet to keep with you at all times. Use this if you ever feel down or lonely to cheer you up. I love you very much, and I'll always be here for you. You're a wonderful person, inside and out. You're loved by many, many people. You're a loving person, always willing to give of yourself to help someone else. Remember the last time you were in my arms. We hugged and kissed, felt each other's closeness. We love each other, and we find comfort in each other. I try to make you feel safe and secure, to make you feel as if no harm will ever come to you. You can be sure that no harm will come from me. If you ever need someone to talk to, you know I'm here. If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, someone to vent on, or someone to hold you and tell you everything will be all right, I'll be there. I love you and you love me, and forever that will be. So don't worry about the problems of today, or the things of the past, just look hopefully upon the future and together we'll see "what dreams may come"! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really nice piece Ashiraladoni. I am sure that your "former #1 fan" will appreciate this very much. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
while not customary poetry, i do sense the poetic emotions that inspire this work. i hope your #1 fan is pleased. i am pleased with it. someone out there does understand what true love is. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~~~~~very nice writing~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
very sweet piece very cute ...the concept of the 'Love Me Sheet' Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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