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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
The blossom blooms bright. It's petels colorful. It's scent sweet. And everything seems brighter for its presence. Butterflys flutter down, To tast it's sweet nector, And spread the seeds of life. Soon the petels wilt, The color fades, And the scent disapears. But the death of the flower, Brings the creation of fruit Rich and fulfilling That lets the world thrive. Okay, what is the flower folks?? Special present for the one who guesses right (okay, so everyone gets it if one person guesses right, but hey, I'm a goofball, what can I say?) "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooooo I want a present...lol. This is a nice riddle but my brian is a little infested at the moment so I couldn't get it. But what you could do is email me the answer and then I can say what it is.  ~AF~  "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Hi Sam! Is it love? Just wondering. Good job on this poem, too. Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Riddle me this Riddle me that You've solved my riddle My hearts come back You've seen through me Heart and soul. Good job my friend You've solved my puzzle Love it is, the flower that never ends. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Hey, now what's my present? Come on Sam, what is it? I guessed right... You can't tell me it's love, 'cuz I can't find it for the life of me... ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*points at the poem* wrote that for you during first period after I saw that you had guessed right. :P But, I do love ya, you're a good friend Heheheheh, well, you want something else?? If I can give it I will, all you have to do is ask."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
simple, yet, picturesque, your poem explains love in a very subtle, realistic comparison. when the flower dies, what is the fruit? if you ask me, i say the fruit of a love gone by is wisdom. we are made wiser about love through our trials and experiences. but, thats just my idea of lost loves fruit. whats yours? |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Actualy, the flower is lust, and the fruit is a more mature relationship, but they are both love Thanks for liking the poem "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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