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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 11:00 PM


Sadness, my sweet
When you are not near
Silence, my sweet
When your voice I do not hear

Cold, my love
When I'm not wrapped up in your arms
Vulnerable, my love
I become to outside harms

Pained, my darling
When I see the truth behind your eyes
Crying, my darling
When I'm privied to your lies

Confused, my heart
When I think about why
Relieved, my heart
When I break down and cry.

© Copyright 2000 Sarah Goldstein - All Rights Reserved
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-04-24 11:26 PM


this is great! at the moment i am feeling this way exactly!
very sincere poem

Bec


 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-04-27 10:23 AM


This is nice writing and deserves to be bumped back to the top for more responses.
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