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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
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Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 09:32 PM


He told me he loved me,
He told me he cared.
He said he wants to hold me tight,
But i was so scared.
I was afraid to fall in love again.
I didnt want to feel the pain.

Turns out I was right.
Those moments we shared,
Those nights under the sky,
Were all just a lie!

I thought it was love,
Yet I was wrong.
What we had was passion,
Which didnt last long.
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"You have to kiss alot of frogs before you find your prince."

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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-04-24 10:12 PM


This happens a lot, sadly..it's hard when you realize that all that's there is on the surface.  Exellent job in portraying this!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-04-24 11:29 PM


this poem is really sad when it comes down to the realisation that is was passion  

great piece though...you conveyed it very well

plenty more frogs....
Bec

 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


Olga
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since 1999-07-26
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Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 2000-04-24 11:52 PM


Thanx both of you. It's nice to know that some1 knows how I felt when i found out that it was just passion.  )
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