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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
I can't live with out the thought of your touch The way I feel, I know I love you too much If I could only have one kiss I'd stop Earth's spin and I would live in pure bliss If all the winds would whisper tales of your soul Eternity wouldn't last to make your spirit whole True love, loyalty Forever is how long we'll make it be I could make you happy If you were mine But I am not worried Just give it time I love how you let your beauty spill out It makes me think, and makes me wanna scream out Your heart is filled with pure energy You make me strong when you say that you believe in me I want to have a place in your heart I wish I knew how or when that could start I love you, I always will But I can't help or stop the way that I feel I could make you happy If you were mine But I am not worried Just give it time *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
OH, wow, that is a very beautiful and touching poem. I like, I like lots.  "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
Thanks y'all. I was kind of upset with this one. It's not really my favorite. But thank you!! *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is such a beautiful poem. well done.... Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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MrHat Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34Gilroy, Ca |
Very Good Poem. I like it a lot. It rings true for me in a sense. "DO NO GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT" Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men and their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught the sun in flight, And learn too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on that sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. -Dylan Thomas |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Yeah, "Just give it time." .. good advice, eh? well done..MrHat ~ Your signature's a bit long there mate.. hehe, ya might wanna shorten it a bit.. I mean, it is nice an' all.. just.. could annoy a few ppl.. takes up a fair bit o'f space.. ^_^ just a word in your ear there.. Lynne |
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