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EvermoreMe New Member
since 1999-12-13
Posts 3 |
thrust in my heart it drained my lungs made my mouth go dry unable to move it hit hard jumping in my stomach and running up my throat before i knew what happened it had taken me over no matter how horrible it grabs at me endlessly never to stop |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Welcome, Evermore! Love can indeed bring such feelings, can't it? Exellent work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Welcome!! This poem was very interesting, I thought that it was almost a bit desperate...(not desperate as in pathetic desperate as in longning for something). You managed to convey your emotions very well. If you ever need help with anything...I'm always here. Love Always, Shell. |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
Great work! I loved it! *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Whew!! Powerful stuff!! Welcome to Passions!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Very nicely written  ) |
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