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hoppy
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0 posted 04-19-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for hoppy   Email hoppy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoppy's Home Page   View IP for hoppy

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You walked through the valley of hidden trees
Gracing through shadows soft as the breeze;
Your dance charmed the creatures and pleased the man,
Hold out your hand and allow the dove to land,
It wishes to know from where it came
Except you and the dove, the world is to blame.
A rainbow falls from a cloud through the sky
A voice bellowed from above saying she will die
He had sent her so i had no control
I just wished she didn't have to go
I could only watch when she fell to the ground.
She then departed and I heard a voice soft in tone
Before me I saw the tree for a moment
Then what i couldn't see was gone
---Written by:Hoppy

11-27-99  



 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
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ESP
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since 01-25-2000
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 04-19-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Wow!!! This made me really think! I like it alot...your style I find very good.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
MerritW
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2 posted 04-19-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for MerritW   Email MerritW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MerritW

This is a really good poem! I loved it.
**Angel**
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3 posted 04-19-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

I like this poem  
It is great!

Rachel8383
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4 posted 04-19-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Rachel8383   Email Rachel8383   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel8383

This sounds very much like Thoreau's writing, I mean the transcendentalist period when all the writers felt like being one with nature.  It's great, I love it!!  Rachel
luvable
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5 posted 06-15-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for luvable   Email luvable   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for luvable

this is a reallly great poem!! I look forward to reading more of your poems!!


Luv oddles& oddles,
Luvable
Lani_DarkOne
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6 posted 06-15-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

Powerful great poem...especially the meaning.



 "You could be my unintended
Choice, to live my life extended...." Muse

"Even when we're apart we'll still be under the same sky," LJ Smith

"Hiding in the musty attic is Elusive
She sits, cross legged in a midst dark cobwebs
Several forms scurry to seek shelter
Beneath her levitating shadow.
Her back rigid , eyes glassy
Gazes intently at time escaping
Sliding, smoothly, as sand sprinkles
Through the hour glass,
A single tear grazes her misty cheek." Lani
hoppy
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7 posted 06-15-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for hoppy   Email hoppy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoppy's Home Page   View IP for hoppy

hey there, thanks for the replies, you all pulled this one up from a LONG time ago. Glad to see someone read it

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


8 posted 11-15-2007 07:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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