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Rachel8383
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since 2000-04-13
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0 posted 2000-04-18 12:12 PM


I remember the time.
I remember the place.
I remember your smile.
I remember your face.

I remember the first time we met.
I remember I never forgot you.
Although I didn't know what was to come,
You said you knew.

I remember our first kiss.
How I wanted it so bad.
I remember you made the first move,
And I was so glad.

I remember your first touch.
How you asked me if I wanted to.
I didn't know what was to come,
But I trusted you when you said you knew.

I remember your first "I love you."
What did you feel when I didn't say it back?
I didn't tell what I didn't know I felt.
Strength to know love, that is what I lacked.

I will always remember your smile.
I will always remember your kiss.
I'll savor every bit of us, of you,
When you is what I miss.


[This message has been edited by Rachel8383 (edited 04-18-2000).]

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**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

1 posted 2000-04-18 02:56 PM


Wow! This poem is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Lindsay

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
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2 posted 2000-04-18 02:57 PM


Oh yeah..I forgot! Welcome to Passions!

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