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Who the ****are u?

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 2000-04-17 10:39 PM

Olga, I am forced to delete this due to the profanities within the piece. If you wish to edit them out and repost, feel free to do so. Thanks for your cooperation! If you have questions, be sure to e-mail me at twilightpoetess@yahoo.com

~Alwye~

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 04-17-2000).]

Ashiraladoni
Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

1 posted 2000-04-17 10:42 PM

I liked how your anger is let out in this piece. But perhaps the vulgarities could have been left out. But otherwise a great piece that many can relate to.

~Ashiraladoni

LadyWolf
Junior Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 12

2 posted 2000-04-17 10:45 PM

Great Work! You've shown the warrior side in women who get angry at males who toy with their emotions. Awesome work!!

Under the moon,
Lady Wolf

On the Avenue of Life,
don't forget to take
the Taxi once in awhile.

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