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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Hi everyone. I did not write this poem. My friend did and she wants to post it here before she joins to see what Passions is like. Hope you enjoy it..she's got a real talent. Why is the hole so small In the place where my heart used to be All of the love I had left to give I gave it to you and you threw it at me Oh, I don't know I just don't know who you are anymore You used to be kind Now you don't even call How can you share What you feel in your heart about somebody else When I'm right before you It's like you don't even have a pulse OH , you've changed I don't know who you are at all There are some things, I'll never understand Now I know that you're not my man. [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Very nice poem. Gosh, I can totally relate to it! I am going through this very thing right now with my boyfriend....its a pain in the butt. ~Rachel~ |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Very awsome poem you wrote!Its so true and tells the truth. Heart~on~sleeve |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Vey well written. Sound like it was written from the heart. I hope she keeps it up. Isa  |
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