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Teen Poetry #2

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NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 2000-04-16 12:50 PM

what do you see,
when you look in the mirror,
a stranger gazing at you,
mocking you,
im not afraid anymore,
i found my cure,
my happiness,
a dull blade,
rusting on a shelf,
with no flesh in its grip,
my once only friend,
now rusting on a shelf,
tempting me,
but i,
no longer afraid to look behind my shoulder,
for an invisible predator,
am finally able to say,
i suffer from schitzophrenia.

nat<~~~~funny girl

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

1 posted 2000-04-17 09:37 PM

Nicely written, Nat.. kinda sad..

Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 04-17-2000).]

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

2 posted 2000-04-18 02:51 PM

I am not actually sure what to say here.
This is a great poem

..I was intrigued from beginning to end. Although, I did find it to be kind of sad!

Wow! An excellent poem here.

Lindsay

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