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Scalding Panic

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Yu Lan
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0 posted 04-15-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Yu Lan

Scalding Panic


She twines her hair in her fingers,
Biting her cheek ‘till it bleeds.
Eyes flit nervously,
And although there is nothing,
It all seems too much.
Her panic boils over,
Scalding all around her,
As she runs screaming from the room.


~Lynne~

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Miura, née Chudley - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 04-16-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Extremely vivid description of fear...I think it's excellent! All of your poetry that I have read so far has been great!! Keep posting!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 04-17-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, a great way to capture such an overcoming emotion.  Intense imagery...well done!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
Yu Lan
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3 posted 04-19-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Hey, thank you both.. I was kinda hoping for a few more replies here, ppl!! ^_^
Yeah, this poem is kinda about the fear ppl have.. if they are claustophobic.. or sociophobic.. almost.. ^_^

Lynne
Blue Rose
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4 posted 04-20-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Blue Rose   Email Blue Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Rose

How did you think that one up? Every one feels fear, but it seems so hard to describe, you did it better than I could!  Oh, by the way, I'm new here.  My name is Blue Rose.  Keep up the good work!
natalie
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5 posted 04-21-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for natalie   Email natalie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for natalie

I read this poem, because I read a reply you wrote earlier where you said that true beauty lies inside, and you're so right, so I was very curious to read some of  your work,and it's really good, how you could describe this, very well done,
natalie...
natalie
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6 posted 04-21-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for natalie   Email natalie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for natalie

I read this poem, because I read a reply you wrote earlier where you said that true beauty lies inside, and you're so right, so I was very curious to read some of  your work,and it's really good, how you could describe this, very well done,
natalie...
Yu Lan
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7 posted 04-22-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

thanx,

*smiles* natalie.. thanks.. (I must say, i don't believe this is my best, at all.. hehe) well, I like to read your poetry too..

welcome blue rose, I'm glad u like it..

Lynne
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8 posted 04-22-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

The expression in this poem is wonderful.
I really enjoyed it!

Lindsay
Yu Lan
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9 posted 07-17-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Thank u Lindsay.. hehe, u really r an angel..  

Luv,

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu


Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


10 posted 11-15-2007 07:41 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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