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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2000-04-15 10:33 PM

Scalding Panic

She twines her hair in her fingers,
Biting her cheek ‘till it bleeds.
Eyes flit nervously,
And although there is nothing,
It all seems too much.
Her panic boils over,
Scalding all around her,
As she runs screaming from the room.

~Lynne~

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-16 02:44 AM

Extremely vivid description of fear...I think it's excellent! All of your poetry that I have read so far has been great!! Keep posting!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

2 posted 2000-04-17 10:55 PM

Wow, a great way to capture such an overcoming emotion. Intense imagery...well done!

*Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-04-19 12:23 PM

Hey, thank you both.. I was kinda hoping for a few more replies here, ppl!! ^_^
Yeah, this poem is kinda about the fear ppl have.. if they are claustophobic.. or sociophobic.. almost.. ^_^

Lynne

Blue Rose
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since 2000-04-20

Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA

4 posted 2000-04-20 07:45 PM

How did you think that one up? Every one feels fear, but it seems so hard to describe, you did it better than I could! Oh, by the way, I'm new here. My name is Blue Rose. Keep up the good work!

natalie
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since 2000-04-02

Posts 56

5 posted 2000-04-21 08:13 AM

I read this poem, because I read a reply you wrote earlier where you said that true beauty lies inside, and you're so right, so I was very curious to read some of your work,and it's really good, how you could describe this, very well done,
natalie...

natalie
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since 2000-04-02

Posts 56

6 posted 2000-04-21 08:13 AM

I read this poem, because I read a reply you wrote earlier where you said that true beauty lies inside, and you're so right, so I was very curious to read some of your work,and it's really good, how you could describe this, very well done,
natalie...

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

7 posted 2000-04-22 05:20 AM

thanx,

*smiles* natalie.. thanks.. (I must say, i don't believe this is my best, at all.. hehe) well, I like to read your poetry too..

welcome blue rose, I'm glad u like it..

Lynne

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31

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8 posted 2000-04-22 09:42 AM

The expression in this poem is wonderful.
I really enjoyed it!

Lindsay

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

9 posted 2000-07-17 02:32 AM

Thank u Lindsay.. hehe, u really r an angel..

Luv,

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2007-11-15 07:41 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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