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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Everytime the phone rings, I pick up on the first ring Everywhere I go, I look to see if you happen to be there too I think I'm falling, falling for you Everytime you smile, my heart melts Everytime I hear your voice, my pulse increases I think I'm falling, falling for you I'm living in my own world, where everything revolves around you I pray that one day, I'll have your heart I think I'm falling, falling for you Maybe I'm going too far, or obsessing But I believe I'm doing right, I hope i'm not acting like a fool But I'm falling, falling for you |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sweet poem!! I hope the object of your affection is aware of your feelings....? Anyway, all the best with love! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I agree with Lizzie. This is a sweet poem. Good luck with it. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Again thanks. A day after i wrote this the guy i liked found out i liked him and come to find out he feels the same about me so..i guess some good does happen. Isa |
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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
I could feel the love and care in that one. it was really sweet |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
That's a very sweet poem. I enjoyed it very very much! *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Boy, haven't we all been there. That was really great. The emotions showed well! Keep up the writing. Love Always, Shell. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Boy, haven't we all been there. That was really great. The emotions showed well! Keep up the writing. Love Always, Shell. |
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