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Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana

0 posted 2000-04-15 10:03 PM


A figure stands on the edge
Moonlight highlights his figure
Tears streaming down his cheeks
Drop into the cold water
Drops to his knees
Prays for forgiveness
Asks for his heart to be mended
For his tears of fear and sadness to disappear
Prays for forgiveness
For what he plans to do
Looks at the sky
Stands up as if reaching for the stars
Steps forward and falls
His body plunges into the cold water
As he falls to the bottom
He closes his eyes
Memories of their joyous time
Thoughts of a love once had flashes through his mind
The cold pierces his body like knives
He ignores the pain
Continues his unending journey
A journey that will last him eternity
A journey into the underworld
One that he cannot take back
A decision that's too late to change

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-16 03:35 AM


Chilling poem there, Isabelle. I hope it didn't really happen. I have to say, it is also a beautiful poem too.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
2 posted 2000-04-16 10:41 PM


Sorry so chilling. It's weird though it was a dream i had once. It didn't happen that i know of. I just thought i would post something a little different though. Thanks again for your response.

Isa  

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