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AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...


0 posted 04-15-2000 03:23 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for AngelShell


Alone.

No one to comfort no one to share,
The undying pain which I have to bare.
Building up slowly the discomfort and rage,
Like an animal trapped, bared up in a cage.
Burning inside with uncontrollable hate,
Surrendering unwillingly to my pre-decided fate.
Dying resentfully reseeding to light,
Fading away from the cruel hurtful night.
© Copyright 2000 Michelle - All Rights Reserved
Tara
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since 02-21-2000
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1 posted 04-15-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Tara   Email Tara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tara

This is such a sad poem.  I know exactly the pain it is describing.  It hurts so much to be alone.  I like how you rhymed and it flowed really well.  I hope to read more.  Tara
MerritW
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since 04-18-2000
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2 posted 04-21-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for MerritW   Email MerritW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MerritW

That is such a great poem.  It's sad, but I know how you feel.  

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 04-21-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is very good writing.  The expression is pretty powerful.  
Well done AngelShell
Deranger
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Somewhere, between here and th


4 posted 08-30-2000 03:01 AM       View Profile for Deranger   Email Deranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deranger

Alone, no!  You are not that lucky, you're stuck with me!


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 11-15-2007 07:42 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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