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Teen Poetry #2

The terror from within

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

0 posted 2000-04-15 02:53 AM

There is so much anger,
That lives inside my heart.
Rustle the beast that lies within,
And you dance with the devil.

Yet you still push on,
Seeing how far you can get.
My suggestions for you to stay away,
Are seeming to be futile exercises.

Head the warning,
For I won't repeat it again.
Keep your distance from me completely,
Or you may stumble upon something you can't control.

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

1 posted 2000-04-15 03:21 AM

Hmmmm... I like it, very interesting this. Seems to have anger, rage AND compassion all at the same time... as well as some annoyance perhaps.... well, very nice, I like lots.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-04-15 03:32 AM

Thanks Sam. I was a little angry when I wrote it...that might explain the rage, anger and annoyance.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-04-15 02:22 PM

Expression expressed in fine form.
Nice writing.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-04-16 04:26 AM

Wow!! What a mixture of emotion!! This is an excellent poem, A.F.....what is your real name by the way? Anyway, really enjoyed this and hope you don't feel quite so mad anymore!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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