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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2000-04-14 12:51 PM


Dear Mary

By the light of the moon
At the window she sits,
Writing a letter to her friend.
‘Dear Mary’ She writes,
‘I miss you so much...
Wish that you were here...’
As she throws it from the window,
The wind picks it up,
Sends the tear stained letter
Swirling to the sky.
She closes her eyes
And turns from the window;
She hopes it will reach
Her friend in Heaven.



© Copyright 2000 Lynne Miura, née Chudley - All Rights Reserved
jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
1 posted 2000-04-14 03:22 AM


Hey, Lynne, I dont think your poems are too profound for the young, try the corner club instead. ^_^


 Jõmes

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-14 05:39 AM


This is a beautiful poem, truly beautiful. I have no words to say how it stirred me within. I hope you will post a lot more of your poetry because it surely is wonderful.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-07-02 10:36 PM


Thanx u two.. James.. yep, i am quite settled in the pub now, lol.. ooh, i am underaged.. ^^
Lizzie.. thank u very much. ^_^

sorry I didn't reply earlier..


Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-15 07:39 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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