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That Precious Moment
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That Precious Moment |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
You wisked me away and swept me off my feet all in one moment. The music was blaring, but I could not hear it My head was blasting with thoughts of joy and love. I didn't know you, but the moment you embraced me I forgot everything and only cared about you. It went by so quick, that feeling but then I heard something. I heard your soothing voice Who are you? I said to myself But it didn't matter My heart was racing My blood flowing fast I was then with someone else and I had no wonderful feelings about him, only about you. I could see you the entire time Your eyes staring blankly into mine Who are you? I said once again to myself. We were drawn to each other, we walked so quickly and so quietly towards each other with our eyes locked in a daze. The emotion was swirling in a pool around our eyes We joined hands and pulled each other close The world stopped and all I could hear was the thudding of our hearts. What was this feeling? Who are you? I kept saying to myself. You spoke, your voice sending lightning through my veins. I finally knew it, knew who you were. My heart sank, my eyes lost their twinkle, someone I cannot have. The words ran through my mind and became a blur. The moment was lost, but it didn't matter. We shared a special moment, a wonderful love, an amazing feeling Oh, I wish it would come back. [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Hey, our names have somethin in common! (hint "Angel") This poem is very vivid, and all to often it is true. I really enjoyed it! ~Rachel~  ) |
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