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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
My dreamguy would hold me for hours not saying much, He wouldnt tell me he loved me, I would feel it in his touch. He would lye awake after I went to sleep, hopeing and preying I was his to keep. My dreamguy would treat my feelings with tender, loving, care... I could wake him up anytime, he would still be there. He would listen all night and into the day. As long as he could rest peacefully knowing I was ok. My dreamguy would be my soulmate. We would be one, together we would feel the love we have won.. We would love not with words, or the things that we would say.. We would love with our souls in our own speacil way.. This is how my dreamguy would be. Our love would last all eternity. We would be together till death do us part, even then we would still be close at heart. DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ (Dana) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*sigh*...can my dream guy be like that too?!? This is a lovely poem....I wish all gus were like you describe in it!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
Dana....this is the best! you practically delved very deep into my opinion on what a guy should be!! this is so sweet....except you forgot the verse in which he is supposed to smother me in hugs, kisses, chocolates and flowers!!! lol  great work!! and good to see you posting again Bec |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ok...well i am bumping this up coz i love it so much |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
Hey thanx for everyone who replyed to this poem, by the way i changed my name to this cause i had to reformat my computer and i couldnt remember my password... which sux!! but thanx bec!!! DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ Dana |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
wow i read that poem again and i think it sux!!! hehehehe DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ |
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