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Your eyes... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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As though a tempest tempting vessels, Your eyes in whirlpools submerge The open field, the school, the church, Consuming matter, sparing essence. No poet’s words have ever traced Those eyes as closely as your cup. Your lips dissolved, in every drop They left a charming after-taste. "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre, will outlive my dust and will escape decay, And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
what can i say?? this is so poetic!!! this is gorgeous! i loved it.......if someone wrote that to me...i would be melting right about now..  great work and keep it up!!! Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks you for such a nice compliment. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, a very beautiful poem. very nice if I do say so myself. so that is how you spell gorgeous, I've been trying to remember that all day for a poem that I finnaly worked around not having that word.... ah well, Once again, very nice poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Dragon, So that's how you spell "gorgeous" but I don't think that's how you spell "finnaly" man. (smile) |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
Do you think maybe you could write a poem about my eyes? Just kidding. That was a great poem, very beautiful. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This is wonderful. I am speechless actually! Keep it up. Lindsay |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you! |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I really liked this poem. Marvelouse! |
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