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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Hello, me How are you? Not so Good? Yeah, me too. I'm trying to be strong, be a big girl But in reality, I crumble, fall to my knees, And weep. The sun shines bright today yet i cannot even bare to take the smallest peek at its beauty in fear that my sorrow will scare away its glory. Children play together laughing, having fun their smiles remind me of how pure and simple my life had been, until now. Love how wonderful and fulfulling it is to be all wrapped up in its warm embrace yet i feel nothing Smile a sign of life, love, laughter yet why should i even bother when it's clear that i'm full of sadness (this is a yet-to-be-finished poem...) |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Marvelous, I love how I could really see your expression/mood throughout the poem. Yes it's me replying to my own message, lol. |
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CJM New Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 7 |
Haha, that was quite funny replying to your own post... Anyway, your poem was good, I actually talk to myself sometimes like that and it was quite expressive, hope to see the ending soon! |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ack! hurry up and finish the poem coz you are holding me in suspense!!lol another great poem  Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I like it!! I sometimes talk to myself but not in quite that way...it's more like I think my thoughts aloud I guess. Anyway, you don't have to reply to all of your poetry....check out the rest of the talent in this forum, there is plenty of it!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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