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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
~*HOPE*~ Down the rainfall pours from my eyes, Up the anger swells deep inside. Under the bed I go to hide, On top is the world I've left behind. Right is the way I've yet to find, Wrong turns often make me blind. Below is where my secrets lay, Above, my thoughts go astray. Yesterday is gone, let go of the past, Tommorrow will bring to hope to grasp. |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Hey, I loved your poem Rachel! Hehe, yes I know I am writing to myself, but since no one has replied  i am cheering myself up! |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i think i might start replying to my own poems too soon......lol this is great...and i have no idea why someone has beaten me in welcoming you to passions and congratulating you on a great first post!! i really like it!! seriously....it is a very meaningful piece  keep up the great posts Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
<img src="http://netpoets.net/img/a08.gif"> Welcome to Passions!! This is a lovely first post and I look forward to reading more. As for replying your own poetry..lol..I sometimes get the urge to do that! Seriously though, reply to lots of other poems and it usually bounces right back to you..i.e you end up with plenty of post too! Good Luck and, again, welcome to Passions!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Hi Rachel, Welcome to Passions! I know how you feel about people replying! Lately it seems that I have 0 replys to my poetry...and it makes me sad. Anyways, I adore your poem. I can't wait to see more or your work. Keep posting! Lindsay |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Rachel, I was gone for only a week or so and I come back to find all of this poetry. That was a really good poem and a great first post. I'm looking foward to reading more. ~Sarah |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Welcome to Passions! Nice poem. Will be looking for more work from you. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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