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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
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0 posted 2000-04-11 12:23 PM


Why is it that we tend
To focus on the dark, sad
Aspects of life?
Why is it that we bend
Right before we break,
And then we snap?
Why is it that we lend
Our hearts, minds, and
Souls to carelessness?
Why is it that we mend
Other's lives, but never
Concentrate on our own?
Why is it that we send
Love to one another but,
Can never recieve it?

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-11 02:24 AM


I dunno Pharon. I like this poem though..I like it alot!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-04-11 06:03 AM


why is it that we never know the answers?
we can ask the questions even though we know there will be no possible response.
why is it that we suffer?
why do we mend a heart then break another?
why is it that not violence and pain can break a man, but the bleeding of a heart can?

i love your poem....every question and aspect is so true..

well done

Bec

 "tears are the essence of our souls"


natalie
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since 2000-04-02
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3 posted 2000-04-11 03:40 PM


I think no one can answer these questions, it's just life, there's not much to do about it, but try to look on the bright side of life, although these questions exist and want to be answered, but I think that will be allmost impossible,
natalie

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