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natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56


0 posted 2000-04-10 04:52 PM


OK, this poem is about the love of my life, I haven't really spoken to him more then 20 words, but I really love him, I don't know how it's possible, next year he will go to America and study there for a year (I live in Belgium) Can someone help me?
I really, really love him.I'm afraid to really fall in love with someone, because I don't wanna get hurt, that's maybe I try not to see this guy, but every time I see him,...


I already love you,
   and I don't even know you,
From the first time I saw you,
   I knew we were ment to be together
I already love you
   and I don't even know you,
so if I would know you
   I would fall completely in love
you would steal my heart away
   and take it with you to America
I would follow it,
   but I can't,
So please keep away from me!!


© Copyright 2000 natalie - All Rights Reserved
NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa
1 posted 2000-04-10 08:23 PM


dont worry,if he really loves you,things will be ok
**Angel**
Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

2 posted 2000-04-10 08:34 PM


I feel your pain hun! I am sorta going through the same situation.

If you want to talk please email me at
send_lindsay@hotmail.com

Lindsay

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-11 07:19 AM


Natalie, just let nature take its course. If it's meant to be it will and if not, there is the perfect guy still out there for you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-04-12 10:46 AM


Be patient, time has a way of fulfilling destiny.
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-04-13 05:25 PM


You have been given some very good advice here, I hope you listen. I have something to add but I am not sure you will like it. How can you love someone who you have not spoken more then 20 words to? I understand infatuation and chemistry but true love takes time to build. If you feel this strongly already can you afford to risk not finding out? It is only a year and the time will help to make things clearer in both of your minds. It is always better to take the risk and know one way or another then to wonder for the rest of your life.
**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

6 posted 2000-04-13 05:43 PM


Hi Natalie,

I haven't had a chance to email you back yet but I will real soon ok? Things have been really busy here!

Lindsay
I will write you soon

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