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jytree
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0 posted 2000-04-10 09:40 AM


Upon the midnight dreay,
I look upon you so weary,
Weary of fighting,
Weary of dying,
Look at me to see me fight,
Then when I will fade into the night,
Rights,
What rights does a dead man receive,
If you don't know I will tell you,
The dead receive nothing only the free,
So here I lay,
To this day,
Saying "I would rather fighting this endless battle than dying a foolish death",
That is my plea,
Just to be free,


© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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1 posted 2000-04-10 09:42 AM


Sorry about putting two on the post if you can delete it please

 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-10 01:28 PM


This is a really nice poem...I hope you find the freedom you desire.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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