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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-04-10 12:43 PM


Find Yourself

it's meaning i will conceal;
insight i won't reveal.
let your imagination flow,
see the things you don't know!

---Written by:Hoppy


2-10-00  


 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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Limbo
1 posted 2000-04-10 02:33 AM


I like this poem as it leaves so much to the imagination. To me it seems like it is saying to delve into yourself and discover a new you yet at the same time it is saying that the insight to your innerbeing is being concealed.

Nice job.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-10 04:57 AM


This is a very good poem!! Like A.F. said, it really leaves so much to the imagination! I love that!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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