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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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My horoscope was almost always right, And today’s said I’d lose a love. I saw you drive by once, You turned around and came back. My horoscope had been right, I’d lost the only person I ever loved. You drove by again, and stopped, You asked if I wanted a ride. Not typical of me, I accepted, I thought maybe you’d take me away. You drove me around, until I smiled, We began to speak, and even planned a date. My horoscope forgot to mention, That I would meet someone that would care. We lived less than a mile apart, But had never met before that night. The girls laughed and giggled when I told them, “It will never work out” is all they said. That was three years ago, Now they’re just amazed. He holds me just right, Oh, how I love him so. (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"Love isn't always foretold"....just a suggestion...I'm not so good at these title things myself but anyways. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Before I get to a title suggestion, where did you lose a love in this? Alright....title suggestion. "Fortold", "A Date of Fate", "In the Cards". Something along these lines? What do you think? |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like "Lasting Love". I do agree with Marilyn though, sounds like a gain, not a lose. Nice writing Tamma. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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